From: larchiba@unixg.ubc.ca (Jess Archibald)
Newsgroups: alt.tv.x-files.creative
Subject: new: Commitment 15/?
Date: 20 Nov 1995 19:25:16 GMT


I'm going to try and finish posting by the end of the week, so let's get 
down to business.
Disclaimer and story so far:  see part 14

Commitment part 15 by Jess Archibald

	Later that night, after the Lone Gunmen had left to take Doug 
back to Washington to get some equipment, promising to return early in 
the morning, Dana sat on the bed in the guest bedroom, eyes closed, head 
bowed.  Robert had prevailed upon her to stay the night, chasing everyone 
else off with the patient aggressiveness that doctors had been known to 
display on occasion, but for now she was too keyed up to sleep.
	They were so close to getting Mulder, that, with her eyes closed, 
she could visualize it, hear his horrible jokes and comments, feeling 
with a dull ache just how much she had missed them and him.
	Robert's question from yesterday, was Mulder worth so much 
trouble, had struck her as terribly cold although she knew intelluctually 
that it hadn't been his intent.  he had never met Mulder nor seen first 
hand the affection that she shared with her friend and partner.  She 
would take any risk to save him now and she didn't think that Robert 
fully understood that, although it appeared he was beginning to.
	"Dana?"  Robert's gentle query accompanied a soft knock on the door.
	"it's open," she called bakc, opening her eyes and lookijng up as 
he entered.
	"How do you feel?"
	"A little stiff, but better than before."
	"No more nodding off at the wrong moment?"
	"Not so far, though I don't think the Gunmen will let me drive 
their precious van anytime in the near future."
	Robert's face creased into a faint smile that faded almost as 
soon as it was born.  "I talked to Margaret today.  She called,  wanted 
me to know what had happened..."
	Dana felt all colour drain out of her face.  "what did you tell her?"
	"Nothing...but she's heartbroken right now, Dana.  your mother 
thinks that you're dead...she called me before you know...last fall..."
	"Oh God...what am I supposed to do, Robert?  I can't take the 
risk of going to her...if word were to somehow get back to anyone at the 
Bureau that I was still alive...Mom's not that good an actress..."  She 
felt awful, worse than she ever had.  It was unspeakably cruel to let her 
poor mother think that she was dead, especially after her father's death 
and her own near brushes in the past.  "What am I supposed to do?" she 
repeated in a quiet voice.
	"I don't know," said the older man.  "I can't tell you what to 
do, Dana, anymore than I could in med school.  You always did what you 
thought was best....so far it seems to have worked pretty well."
	she thought of her current situation, of all the situations that 
had come before it, and was struck by the crazy urge to laugh, except 
Robert wouldn't appreciate the humour.  She could think of only one 
person who could and she wouldn't let him down...
	
*********

Day 26
Hoover Building
7:12 a.m.

	Doug practically barreled into the bullpen  that housed most of 
the grunt workers, like him, who weren't assigned to any particular 
branch of the Bureau.  Anthony Hess was the first person to see him and 
smiled broadly when he did.
	"glad to see you're back," he said, tossing a sheaf of papers in 
Doug's direction.  "Here's yesterday's transcripts."
	"You work fast," Doug commented, shrugging out of his overcoat 
and throwing it over the back of his chiar.
	"I have to if I want to go anywhere in this business."  Tony 
grinned.  "How you doin'?  Everything all right?"
	"Yeah, fine, just had some...um...legal troubles with my mother's 
estate that needed to be sorted out A.S.A.P."
	"Your mom's been dead for three years,"  Tony said in surprise.  
"what the hell coudl be so urgent?'
	<just drop it already,> Doug thought in frustration.  "You know 
lawyers, they love to pad their bill at the end of the month."
	"Hmph.  Isn't that the truth."  Tony turned his attention back to 
his own work for a brief instant, lulling Doug into a false sense of 
security.   "It wouldn't be about Scully and Mulder would it?"
	"What?"  Doug experinced a brief but vigorous panic attack before 
realizing that Tony meant something different.  "Oh, no.  but now that 
you bring it up, where is Mulder?"
	"Word has it that he's takin' a few days off.  Who could blame 
him, right?'  I mean his partner just died...sorry, Doug.  I know you 
knew her better than I did..."
	"S'okay."  doug waved his hand.  <'Specially since she's still 
alive...I think I'd feel better if I knew where our Mulder who really 
*isn't* Mulder was though...>	

*********

Raven Crest
9:22 a.m.

	The van was parked around the side of the building, away from 
where Doug had indicated Taylor's office to be.  This time Frohike was 
driving while Langly and Byers tried their hand at hacking itnot the 
files.  Dana was beginning to feel pretty useless, and had taken over the 
task of listening in on taylor's office.  Nothing interesting had 
happened so far and the intricacies of running a facility like Raven 
Crest were starting to bore her.
	<just hang on, Mulder,> she thought, staring into space as she 
listened to the goings on inside the building.  <we're right here...we'll 
find a way to get you out...>  She hadn't slept well the night before and 
was running a slight temperature.  she hadn't told Robert for fear he 
would think it was an infection and drag her kicking and creaming to a 
hospital before things were taken care of.  however, she wasn't a 
complete idiot, and had checked for visible signs of infection around the 
wound, reassured to fidn that there wasn't any.  The fever must be caused 
by something else, or so she rationalized.
	Inside Taylor's office the phone was ringing and she sat 
straighter as he picked up.
	"Taylor...oh, its' you...yes, I see..."
	<Dammit,> sht thought, listening to the enigmatic half 
conversation. 
	"for heaven's sake, man, don't go anywhere *near* her family...i 
don't think a flase show of grief would fool them for long...skinner's 
another story entirely..."
	"I've got something!" Dana called, twisting up the volume nad 
catching the instant attention of the others.  "Tayjlor's talking to 
someone on the phone and he mentioned Skinner.  I think it's our boy..."
	Taylor continued unabated, oblivious to the fact that the four 
were hanging on his every word.
	"Speaking of fooling the FBI, what about that other agent you 
mentioned...*what* did you say his name was!"  a note of shock had entered 
the man's voice.  "Shelton!"
	"Uh oh," said Frohike.
	"He was just here yesterday...no, he didn't ask anything like 
thatg...he said he was here to go over some case histories..."
	"Dammit," Said Langly and Dana in practically the same breath.
	"It can't be coincidence...something's got to be done..."
	Dana felt a sudden flash of fear for Mulder and Doug.
	"No, i don't think we could get away with killing Shelton, not so 
soon after Scully...no, we're nowhere near ready to kill Mulder.  We'll 
have to move him to somewhere else...well, do you have a *better* 
idea...I'm calling him...dammit, I'm not taking responsibility for 
this...it sure as hell isn't *my* fault...yes...you do that..."
	Taylor hung up.
	"Who's 'him'?" demanded frohike.
	"The key to this whole mess," Byers replied.
	"Shhh," langly said pointedly as they heard Taylor punching 
buttons in his phone.
	"Sir, we have a problem," said the doctor.  "It seems that a 
federal agent named Shelton has stumbled onto us.   Mulder needs to be 
moved to another...yes, sir...that can be arranged...tonight?  I 
see...yes, sir, just to be on the safe side...thank-you sir...I'll take 
care of it..."
	he hung up again, leaving the four hardly more enlightened than 
they had been and within five minutes, Taylor had high tailed it out of 
his office.
	"Do we have a cellular?" Dana asked after a moment, thoughts whirling.
	"Yes," Byers said, digging it out and handing it to her.
	"I'm going to call Doug.  If Taylor comes out of Raven Crest, 
follow him.  we have to find out what he's up to."
	"Yes, ma'am," said Frohike flippantly, pulling out from the curb 
and swingin around to the front of the facility.

**********

Hoover Building
10:04 a.m.

	Doug watched the two women come in the room, crossing it to get 
to Skinner's office.  By the time they stepped foot in the room, every 
agent knew who they were and the usual cacophony of the Bureau had died 
to a subdued hush.
	As Maragret and Melissa Scully passed by his desk, he found he 
had to avert his eyes for fear of giving something away that for the 
moment was better left unsaid.  he felt eyes on him as they went by, his 
breath catching for a moment, unable to resist a quick little glance, 
seeing the younger woman looking at his with a cool regard, eyes thoughtful.
	And then they were gone and he breathed a sigh of relief as a bit 
of life began to return to the room, conversations resuming at their 
normal volume.
	Looking up again, he saw Tony hess watching him with a curious 
expression. 
	"What?"
	"If I didn't know better, I'd say the redhead was giving you the 
eye, Dougie."
	"C'mon, Tony, use you god given gift of a brain, such as it is.  
I hardly think she's in the mood to be giving anyone the eye right now, 
much less a federal agent..."
	his pager went off before Tony could come up with a retort.
	<Saved,> he thought thankfully, althought he wondered what made 
Melissa Scully look at him like that.  A quick glance revealed a number 
he didn't recognized and with curiosity, he dialed it, turning his back 
on Hess to facilitate privacy.
	"Doug?" said a voice in his ear as the phone was picked up on the 
other end.
	he caught himself before he blurted out Dana's name.  "Yeah?"
	"Can you talk?"
	"Not really," he replied, realizing that htis wasn't eh best 
place in the world to have a conversation especially since anyone in the 
room could pick up the phone and punch into his extension.  "Can I call 
you back in a few minutes?"
	"Make it quick, Doug.  We've got a problem."  Her voice sounded 
strained but energetic, like she was on to somethin.
	"Five minutes, I promise," he said and hung up.  "I've got to got 
out for a couple of minutes, can you cover for me?"
	"Your girlfriend?" Tony said with a thoroughly evil grin. 
	"Yeah, that *must* be it," Doug replied in disgust.  "Look, I'll 
go for coffee or something and I'll bring you back one, okay?"
	Tony peered at him.  "Everything all right, Doug?
	"yeah, never better."
	"Doug?"
	"It's fine, Tony."  <i'll tell you all about it when it's over, 
but for now, *please* just shut up!>
	Grabbing his suit coat, Doug headed out of the room, down the 
hall and into the Washington smog.

*********

	"Mrs. Scully, I can't tell you how very sorry I am."
	Walter Skinner wanted to wince as he heard himself say the words.
	He'd lost count how many times he had had to utter taht same 
phrase, but it never got easier and it never hurt any less.  It didn't 
matter if he had hardly known an agent or not, it was still a blow that 
crushed a little bit more of his spirit.  And in this case, he had known 
the agent better then most.
	Maragret Scully sat before him, almost staring off into space and 
it was Melissa who answered him one hand resting on her mother's 
shoulder, the other stroking a crystal pendant.
	"I know that this isn't easy fro you either," she said softly.
	Skinner nodded slowly.  "No, it's not..."
	"Where's Fox?" Maragret asked, raising her eyes to meet his gaze, 
her look rimmed with red.
	This was one of the questions he had been dreading.
	"Agent Mulder is taking some time off..."
	"I don't understand."
	<That makes two of us,> Skinner thought, a bit puzzled by 
Mulder's behaviour of late.  "I'm afraid that Mulder blames himself for 
what happened..."
	"Ridiculous," scoffed Maragret, a bit of life creeping into her eyes.
	"sir," Melissa began, something lurking behind her gaze, "I have 
to ask, but I know that Dana's -- body --" she stumbled over the word, 
"hasn't been found yet...is there *any* chance that..."
	Skinner rubbed the bridge of his nose.  "It's been several days, 
now Miss Scully.  If Agent Scully had survived...we would know by now..."
	She nodded, but guardedly, a thoughtful look in her eyes.

*********

===========================================================================

From: larchiba@unixg.ubc.ca (Jess Archibald)
Newsgroups: alt.tv.x-files.creative
Subject: new: Commitment 16/?
Date: 20 Nov 1995 23:20:23 GMT


here's the next bit
Disclaimer:  see part 14 if you're that desperate.

Commitment part 16 by Jess Archibald

	Doug walked into the park that was near the hoover Building, 
pulling out his cellualr and dialing the number again.
	"Doug?"
	"I'm here, Dana.  What's going on?"
	"Taylor spoke to the double and let your name slip -- "
	"Dammit."
	"Right.  They know that something's not right and they're 
planning to move Mulder tonight."
	"This might be our chance."
	"I know, but we're not sure exactly how they're going to do it  
yet.  We're following taylor right now.  He left his office in a big rush 
after he tlaked to whoever's in charge of this whole thing..."
	"I'm coming back to Baltimore," Doug said decisively.  "Dana, I 
think we need more help on this...let's fact it, there's only two of wus 
who can legally stop this and you don't even have a gun..."
	"I don't think we're going to be able to stop this be legal 
means.  We can't bring anyone else into this."
	Not the words he wanted to hear.
	"Look, I'll be there in about an hour and a half.  We can argue 
about it then."  He paused before speaking again.  "Your mother and 
sister are here talking to Skinner."
	She swore softly.  "How do they look?"
	"Like someone just died."
	"Did you speak to them?"
	"No, but your sister was giving me a funny look though."
	"Whatever you do, don't talk to her."  Dana sounded panicky.  "I 
don't know how, but Missy can smell a lie at fifty paces."
	"I won't..."
	"The double...he isn't..." She faltered, but he knew what she was 
asking.
	"he's not anywhere near them.  Supposedly, he's taking a couple 
of days off."
	'Thank God."
	"Okay, I'm going to get my car and head back.  Where should I 
meet you?"
	"I'll leave word with Robert where we'll be."   She sounded 
reluctant  to get the older man involved again, but it was easier than 
calling Doug every time they took another turn following Taylor.
	"All right.  See you in a bit."  he hung up and stated back to 
the building, seeing the Scullys coming out just as he crossed the 
street.  he slipped in without them seeing him and headed for his desk to 
tell Tony he was leaving.
	The other agent gave him a sympathetic look as he came back in 
the room.
	"I tried to cover for you, but Skinner's on the warpath again and 
he wants to see you."
	"Now?"
	"Yep."
	<dammit,> Doug thought, heading for the inner sanctum.  <Not now, 
*not* now.>

********

Baltimore

	dana handed the phone back to Byers, relaying most of what Doug 
had had to say, watching Frohike take another turn faster than he 
probably had to.  she didn't say anthing about his driving though, 
knowing that he had probably had more experinece tailing someone than 
half the agents in the whole FBI.
	"Anyone have any idea where Taylor's going?" Byers asked.
	"He said that he woud take care of it," mused Langly.
	"Which means that he's going to make arrangements for the 
transfer," dana said, chewing her lower lip.
	"He's stopping," Frohike reported, dropping down in speed a 
little.  "In front of a holiday Inn."
	"Out of town help?" postulated Byers.
	"Not necessarily," Dana cautioned.  "the FBI uses hotels to house 
agents on stakeouts or wiretaps all the time.  It's governmental procedure."
	"In other words, this tells us nothing," groused Langly .
	she nodded unhappily, stifling a wince as a stab of pain ran up 
her side.  It felt like an infection of some kind had settled in after 
all from the gunshot and it was making her slightly nauseous.  She'd have 
to see about getting some antibiotics somehow and soon, otherwise she'd 
be next to useless later on.
	"Suggestions anyone?' Byers asked.
	"We wait here," she interjected before Langly could open his 
mouth.  She knew what he would have suggested:  Get someone in the hotel 
and try to eavesdrop on any conversation.  That was too risky for right 
now.  "We'll keep track of where he goes and *if* possible, who he sees, 
but we stay *here*, all right?"
	Langly looked sheepish, but mumbled his ascent.

*********

Hoover Building

	Skinner watched as Shelton crept into his office and took a seat 
with a muttered greeting.  to the assistant director, the younger man 
looked tired and worn out, like someone had dropped an enormous weight 
onto him.  he realized that Shelton had been...well, if not friends with 
Scully and Mulder, he was certainly more than just another Bureau colleague.
	"Agent Shelton, I notice that you took a personal day yesterday.  
Is anything wrong?'
	A flash of guilt raced across his features, than vanished behind 
a bland mask.  "No, sir."
	"Where were you?'
	"sir?"
	"You heard me.  I tried to reach you several times yesterday.  I 
thought that you might want to be kept posted on the investigation of 
Agent Scully's -- "  Which word to use?  Murder?  Disappearance?  he 
settled on the latter, reminding himself that no matter hwat he had told 
Scully's family, her body *hand't* been found yet.  When it came to 
Mulder or Scully, Skinner didn't think anything was impossible.
	A funny look crossed Shelton's face at the mention of Scully's 
name, making Skinner peer a little deeper at the other man.
	"Shelton, what's going on with you?"
	"Nothing, sir."
	"Then why do you look like someone just told you they killed the 
president and begged you not to tell?"
	The guilty look returned, stirring Skinner's instincts that had 
gotten him into the business in the first place.  It didn't take a genius 
to figure out that Shelton was hiding something and that it had to do 
with Scully.
	"Shelton, this office has been in a state of upheaval for the 
last few days, searching for Agent Scully.  I would hate to find out that 
you've been with holding information about her disappearance."  he donned 
his most intimidating look and aimed it at the younger man.
	"Me, sir?'	
	Skinner said nothing, watching Shelton try not to squirm.  
Something was going on here and he wasn't about to let it go.

*********

Baltimore
1:05 p.m.

	Taylor was heading back to Raven Crest, the Lone Gunmen van right 
behind.  Following him to the hotel had given them nothing more to go 
on.  the four hadn't seen Taylor actually speak to anyone and they 
couldn't prove that he had actually met with anyone.
	"We don't know what they have planned for tonight," complained 
Frohike, relieved from driving from Byers.
	"No we don't," Dana said simply.  "We'll have to keep watch on 
Raven Crest, looking for any departures, especailly ones taking place 
this evening..."
	"What do we do though?" questioned Langly.  "we won't be able to 
follow every one we see."
	"We'll have to pick our best bet," Byers said.
	"And hope it's the right one.'  Dana closed her eyes for a 
minute.  <god, Mulder, if only we could let you know we're here...>
	"Shouldn't Shelton be here by now/" Langly asked, changing the subject.
	"He should be at Robert's right now," she replied, running a hand 
through her hair.
	Taylor was back in his office by this time, their van parked 
behind the building.
	"Hold all my calls," he was saying to his secretary.  "I'll be in 
conference for the next hour."
	The four listened intently, hoping that he would be in conference 
with someone who could reveal more information, but Taylor was actually 
discussing another patient's history with her family.
	"I'll let Shelton know we're going to be here for a while," Byers 
said, digging out his phone and dialing.  "Shelton, it's Byers...*what*?  
Yes, she's here...just a second."  He held the phone out to Dana, an 
inscrutable look on his face.
	"What's wrong?" she asked, taking it.
	he didn't reply, just shook his head.
	"Doug?" she said into the phone.
	"You'd better get over here, Dana," he said.  "There's someone 
here who wants to talk to you."
	"Who?"
	There was a shuffling sound, Doug's phone being passed to another 
person. 
	"Agent Scully?"
	She felt her eyes widen in shock as she recognized the other voice.
	It was Skinner.

********

===========================================================================

From: larchiba@unixg.ubc.ca (Jess Archibald)
Newsgroups: alt.tv.x-files.creative
Subject: new: Commitment 17/?
Date: 21 Nov 1995 21:53:36 GMT


Here's the next piece...
Dislaimer:  Any characters you recognize are copyrighted 1993 by CC and 
10-13 productions.  The story, Shelton, and Wainwright are all mine...
Story to date:  Mulder really isn't Mulder, he's a government back double 
out to cause trouble (Oh, look a rhyme)  Scully and the Lone Gunmen are 
looking for the real Mulder and have found him at a psych institution in 
Baltimore.  Scully was thought dead by everyone at the Bureau after being 
shot and dumped in the Potomac, but she was rescued by Langly and <gasp> 
Frohike.  Skinner has just found out his agent is still alive...  (Is 
everyone thoroughly confused now, or is it just me?)

COMMITMENT part 17 by Jess Archibald

Residence of Robert Wainwright
1:37 p.m.

	There were two new cars in Robert's driveway as the van pulled up 
and Dana recognized both of them.  One was Doug's and the other belonged 
to  Skinner, both with D.C. license plates.
	As the vehicle stopped, she got out of the back with reluctance 
that was mirrored in the looks the other three were giving her.
	"We'll be back at Raven Crest," Byers said.  "Taylor should be in 
conference until two and we'll see what he does after that."
	"I'll catch up to you there then," she said, looking towards the 
house. 
	"Good luck."
	"Thanks, Frohike.  I have a feeling that I'm going to need it."  
<Lots of it.>
	Robert met her at the front door as the van drove off with a honk 
of its horn.
	"They're in the kitchen," he said with sympathy.
	"Thanks."  She followed him inside.  "Robert, do you have any 
antibiotics?" 
	"Has an infections set in?" he asked with concern.
	"I think so, but it's only a mild one..." She peered down the 
hall at the enterance to the kitchen.
	"He's not angry if that's what you're worried about."
	"It's not, but thanks."
	"I'll be down rooting through my supplies if anyone needs anything."
	"All right."
	She hurried down to the kitchen, pushing open the door with 
trepidation.  Regardless of what she had told Robert, she knew that 
Skinner had to be at least a *little* bit upset and he wasn't the easiest 
person to deal with when he was mad.
	Doug looked up with a guilty expression as she walked in.  
"Sorry," he mouthed with a tiny shrug.
	Skinner got to his feet, the mug of coffee in front of him 
ignored for the moment.
	"Agent Scully, are you all right?" he asked and she could  hear 
the real concern in his voice.
	"I'm fine, sir," she said evenly.
	"Then would you like to tell me what the hell is going on?" he 
demanded, sitting back down with an irritated look.  "Agnet Shelton 
hasn't exactly been forthcoming."
	She shot Doug a surprised look.
	"Director Skinner knew that I was withholding information," he 
said with an apology in his whole manner.  "I'm sorry, Dana..."
	"It's all right," she said.  "Sir, what do you know?"  She sat 
down across from him and folded her hands onto the table.
	"I know that the Bureau's been looking for you for several days 
now and that you haven't even bothered to check in and let us know you're 
still alive.  I know that I had to tell your family that you're dead and 
that Mulder's withdrawing into self blame -- "
	"You didn't tell him?" she asked Doug.
	"I thought you could explain better than I could."
	"Explain what?"
	<Oh boy,> she thought.  <Here we go again.>
	"Agent Mulder's been kidnapped by people I can only presume work 
for some secret branch of the military -- "
	"*What*?  When did this happen?  I saw him yesterday -- "
	"Sir, the man you saw is not Mulder.  He's working for whoever's 
behind this and has been impersonating Mulder for almost a month."  
Skinner was giving her a look he usually reserved for Mulder but she 
plunged on anyway.  When she was finished recounting everything that had 
happened, dodging around the issue of the Lone Gunmen, he sat back and 
practically gaped at her.
	"Agent Scully, are you telling me that Mulder is currently being 
held in a *psychiatric* hospital?"
	"Yes, sir."
	"And that you are involved with a covert wiretap on that same 
facility." 
	"Yes, sir."  She met his gaze with one of her own, telling him 
without words that she wasn't backing down on this one.
	They stared at each other for a long time and Doug finally 
cleared his throat nervously, breaking the staring match.
	"The question is, what do we do now?" he said carefully.
	Skinner looked away and back.  "Scully has a point about not 
being able to trut our own people *if* she's right about  this..."
	"Sir, if I wasn't, they wouldn't have tried to kill me."
	"Agreed."
	"Our plan was to watch Raven Crest to see when and where they 
were planning to move Mulder and follow them from there.  If we found an 
opening we would act upon it."
	"Huh."  Skinner thought it over for a minute.  "All right, 
Scully, we'll try it your way, but if I see hard evidence of what you're 
suggesting, I have no option but to request backup from the Bureau."
	She was surprised he was giving her even this much leeway.
	"Thank-you, sir."
	Robert came back in at this point and tossed Dana a vial of 
pills.  She caught it automatically and made a slight face as she read 
the label.
	"You wanted anitbiotics," he said with a wry smile.
	"Thanks."  She took the lid off and shook one bright coloured 
pill out into her palm.  Doug pushed his untouched coffee in her 
direction and she used the now cold drink to wash it down with.
	"Antibiotics?" Skinner asked.
	"The bullet wound is slightly infected," she said matter of factly.
	He nodded just a bit and then stood, the other two agents 
following his example.  His gaze met Dana's and she thanked him with her 
eyes, knowing that he was risking almost as much as she was by helping her.
	"We'd better get to Raven Crest," he said simply.

*********

	They were moving him.
	The orderly had told him as much at one point before he started 
flying without the aid of any man made interference.
	Mulder knew that hope was running  out for him and so was time.

*********

9:02 p.m.

	Skinner had declined meeting the Lone Gunmen, saying that neither 
party would be comfortable knowing precisely who the other was.  Dana was 
just as happy avoiding that epic meeting entirely.  Somehow, she didn't 
think that the LG's antics would be a big hit with her boss and she 
preferred not to find out.
	Instead, they had split up into three groups, two people per 
vehicle, spread out on all sides save the front of Raven Crest in order 
to maximize their chances of seeing Mulder.  Byers and Frohike were in 
the van, watching the read, Langly and Doug were on one side, Skinner and 
Dana on the other.
	"Charming place," Skinner said wryly, peering out the window.
	"It's horrible," Dana replied.  Mulder had at one point or 
another expressed doubt about his sanity and she could only wonder what 
being trapped in a place like this was doing to him.
	She hadn't realized that she had spoken out loud until Skinner 
said, "If there's one thing I've learned about Mulder, it's that if he 
hasn't lost his mind by now, it's doubtful that he ever will."
	She looked at him for a minute then felt the corners of her mouth 
turn up slightly, fears slightly allayed.  If Mulder could go chasing 
after E.B.E.s, mutants and wild beastmen without going insane then there 
was probably very little left that could push him completely and 
irrevocably over the edge.
	Or so she hoped...
	That dark thought reaced through her mind before she could stop 
it and she looked out the window again before the loss of strenght could 
show in her eyes.
	Skinner's cellualr began to ring from the dashboard.
	He picked it up and spoke briefly with whomever was on the other 
end before handing it to Dana.
	"I think it's for you," he said dryly as she took it.
	"Yes," she said into it.
	"There's something going on back here, Scully," Byers said 
urgently.  "Frohike thinks you'd better take a look...wait a minute..."
	There was a brief shuffling noise and Frohike came on.
	"Dana, there's three cars out here...I can't really see who's in 
each of them...the windows look tinted...but I saw a man getting into one 
of them and it's the same guy...uh...that was on the Potomac."
	"Are you sure?" she asked sharply, regretting her tone instantly 
but if he was right then they were talking about the same man who had 
shot her.
	"Positive...his car's pulling out now and it's coming around 
Langly's side..."
	"Stay on the others," she said instantly.  "We'll each have to 
take a car and we'll take this one...."  She covered the mouthpiece for a 
minute, turning to Skinner.  "There's a car coming around the far 
side...one of the men in it is the same one that shot me...there's two 
other cars out back and -- "
	"And you think we should follow this one."  Skinner pulled away 
from the curb and turned left just in time to see the taillights of the 
other car begin to fade in the distance.
	Her heart rate was beginning to spped up and she told herself 
firmly that they weren't going to lose them as she turned her full 
attention  back to the phone.
	"We're on him," she reported.
	"And we're following the other car that just left."  Byers had 
regained control of the cellular from Frohike  who was the designated 
driver.  "It looks like they were expecting the place to be watched...uh, 
Scully, you do know that Mulder might not even *be* in any of these cars, 
don't you?"
	"Yes, I know, but even if he's not, whoever *is* in them can tell 
us where to find him...just be careful...watch where they're going but do 
*not* go near them...all right?"
	"We're not grandstanders, Scully," he said with gentle humour.  
"We value our lives too much and will be more than happy to let you 
trained professionals take the risk."
	"Uh-huh."
	"Really."
	"Good bye," she said pointedly and hung up, dialing Dou'gs number 
as she and Skinner followed the car down a busy street.
	"Shelton."
	"It's me.  We're following that first car."
	"I thought as much.  We had a pretty good view of the guy getting 
in to drive and Langly here said that you'd want to take this one.  I 
tried to get through to you but I guess Byers already told you."
	"That he did.  They're following another car..."
	"There's one left...it just pulled out and we're right 
behind...here, wait a  sec..."
	A minute later Langly was the one on the phone.
	"Jeez, Scully," he said sardonically.  "Where does the FBI find 
you guys?  Shelton needs both hands  to drive.  Are you sure he's done 
this before?"
	She could swear she heard Doug tell him to shut up or get out and 
walk.  Things never changed and the LG were always to be counted on for 
humour at odd moments.  She supposed that's why Mulder liked them so 
much; they reminded him of himself.  She also figured that's why she was 
glad they were around right now.
	"Keep us posted," she said.
	"All right, but tell Shelton to *not* use the speed bumps as 
launching pads, all right?"  He hung up on her.
	"What's going on, Scully?" Skinner asked, not taking his eys off 
the car in front of them, screened by about three other vehicles and 
several hundred yards.
	"Everyone's following one of the cars.  Heaven help us if we're 
wrong and Mulder's not in any of them..."
	"But as you were saying, I presume, if he isn't, we can still 
find out where he is through someone who is in them."
	"Yes, sir."
	"Makes sense."
	They drove on in silence for a while then Dana cleared her throat.
	"Sir?  What are we going to tell the Bureau when -- " she 
couldn't bring herself to say 'if' " -- we find Mulder?"
	"Agent Scully, we wouldn't dare be anything less than truthful."  
The corners of Skinner's mouth twitched.   "No one would dare ask us 
twice when they hear what we have to say.  They won't believe us.  I'm 
still having trouble believing it."
	She looked back out the window.	
	"So am I, sir, so am I."

**********	
	
	Byers and Frohike were bouncing along a dirt road, the van 
slewing sideways every time they had to make a steering adjustment.
	"Frohike!" Byers was complaining loudly.  "Slow down or you'll 
drive right over them!"
	The car they were pursuing was about three miles ahead of them, 
bounding over ill used roads that threatened to send both vehicles into 
orbit.  The only good thing was that both automobiles were throwing up 
dust clouds in their wake that would, with a little luck, prevent the 
lead car from noticing the Lone Gunmen's van.
	"I'm doing the best I can," Frohike snapped in return, fighting 
the wheel and hoping that all the jarring didn't damage any of their 
computer equipment.  "We're getting a long ways out from Baltimore, 
Byers.  If things heat up, we're on our own."
	"Not comforting, Frohike.  Shut up and drive."

**********

	Langly yelped as he lifted several inches out of his seat and 
then came crashing back down with an impact that reverberated through his 
spine.
	"Sorry," Shelton muttered, not looking much less rattled.  They 
were traveling over dirt roads that left much to be desired, striving to 
keep the other car in sight without tripping them off that they were being 
followed.
	"Don't be," Langly returned with a grin.  "I think I'm enjoying myself"
	Shelton spared a second to shoot an incredulous look over at 
him.  "You've got to be kidding me."
	"I am."  He tossed the cellular up onto the dashboard.  "We're 
out of the service area.  I can't get through to any of the others."
	"Hopefully everthing's fine and they've found Mulder and are all 
waiting for us when we're finished chasing thse jerks all over the state."
	The two looked briefly at each other.
	"Nah..."
	
**********

	The car was jostling Mulder violently back and forth.
	Of course no one had bothered to consult him about a seatbelt.  
That would have been too humane.  With his arms trapped in a 
straightjacket and his sense of balance seriously off center due to 
another injection, he was helpless to prevent his body from following 
whatever shift the car made.
	He couldn't be sure, but he thought he heard the driver snicker   
whenever Mulder hit the car door.
	Never one given to motion sickness, Mulder was beginning to 
develop an acute case.
	Through it all was a building realization that he was going to 
die.  It didn't matter if they took him out and blew his brains out or 
let him rot in some nut house or another because bit by bit he was dyding 
as little pieces of his spirit gave up and withered away.

**********
	
	"Where the hell are they going?" Skinner demanded, following the 
car out of Baltimore and onto some roads that had seen better days.
	"I wish I knew," Dana replied, gripping the dashboard and 
suppressing a tiny whimper as the rough terrain get around the shock 
absorbers and snapped her side against the seatbelf hard enough to make 
her see stars from time to time.  "There's nothing *out* here."
	"Not that we know of any way..."
	She gasped, cutting him off as a bright light suddenly flashed 
before her eyes.
	"What the -- "
	Until Skinner's question died unuttered she had thought that it 
was just her, but now she realized that the light was filling the 
windshield, blotting out the view of the road.
	Quickly, she lifted her wrist and looked at her watch, eyes 
watering against the glare.
	The tires shrieked as they went into a spin,  Skinner loosing 
control as the brilliance blinded him.
	Even as the car spun the light was still there, growing more and 
more intense until the interior of the car faded into a wash of pure light.
	Dana felt a rush of fear, instinctual terror as she squeezed her 
eyes shut, feeling the car continue its spin with no one to guide it...

**********

	"There's nothing here!" Frohike exclaimed.
	"I know, I know."  Byers had turned on the overhead light to 
squint at a road map.  "I don't understand...where are they going?"
	"Maybe they know we're following them and are luring us out to 
somewhere secluded so they can off us."
	"Frohike, do you have to sound so enthusiastic when you say that?"
	"Sorry."
	"Besides, we reached secluded fifteen mintues ago and I don't 
think they're going to stop any time soon."
	"I hope we've got enough gas to -- "
	A bright flash of light cut Frohike off, filling the front of the 
van, making both men shut their eyes with cries of surprise and shock as 
Frohike lost control of the vehicle...

**********

	Doug experinced an intense wave of panic as the white light 
blinded him and the steering wheel refused to respond to his commands.
	He couldn't see anything, but heard Langly give a cry of excitement.
	"It's an E.B.E." he shouted, oblivious to the fact that he was in 
an out of control car.
	Doug didn't know what the hell Langly was talking about and at 
this particular moment he didn't really  care as he fought to regain 
control of a vehicle that refused to respond.
	The light seemed to grow and grow until it threated to swallow 
them up...

**********

	Mulder saw the light and thought his time was up.
	But when he felt the car lurch, he realized that it wasn't the 
brilliant light of the afterlife that was surrounding him, but the 
intense radiance of an alien craft and the old thrill returned, giving 
him back some of the strength that he had lost and thought gone forever.
	He heard the panicked cry of the driver as the car slewed out of 
control but Mulder wasn't afraid...at least not of the car...and 
strangely enough, not for his sanity...
	The light seemed to be warm, not the cold brilliance he had expected.
	And then he saw something that made him doubt what he was seeing 
yet again...

**********

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From: larchiba@unixg.ubc.ca (Jess Archibald)
Newsgroups: alt.tv.x-files.creative
Subject: new:  Commitment 18/?
Date: 22 Nov 1995 19:27:12 GMT


Home stretch everyone...three to four more parts at the most...should be 
finished by the end of the day...I'm going to miss this...yeah, right...

Disclaimer and story update:  See part 17

Commitment part 18 by Jess Archibald

	The car horn was blaring.
	Skinner forced himself to sit up and that seemed to cure that problem.
	The light was gone and in its wake, he wondered what had caused it.
	The car had come to a halt against the shoulder of the road, not 
quite facing the way it had been before, but close enough.  Through the 
night darkness which had returned, he could see the car they had been 
following, its taillights on, but it wasn't moving.
	"Scully?"  He glanced over at the passanger seat as she stirred.  
"You all right?"
	"I'll live," she compromised, one hand reaching for her side, the 
other lifting slightly so she could see her watch.  "Oh my God!"
	"What?" he asked in alarm.
	"We've lost an hour."
	"We've  *what*?"  he flashed back to her first assignment with 
Mulder and the unsubstantiated reports of time loss that they, or rather 
*Mulder*, had insisted happened.
	"I checked my watch...just as the light hit us...we've lost an 
hour..."  Her voice trailed off as she fumbled out of her seatbelt and 
pushed her door open.  "We've got to check that car..."
	Skinner got out as well, drawing his gun, part of him reveling in 
the adrenaline that was flowing through his system.  She had a head start 
on him, but he caught up quickly, grabbing her arm and pulling her back, 
indicating that he should go first.  her mouth opened, the protest 
automatic, but she swallowed it back at the last moment, nodding 
instead.  Sexism had nothing to do with it; he had a gun and she didn't.
	he approached the car slowly, unable to see into it because of 
the tinted windows, the gun leveled at where the driver should be.  The 
engine was still running but there was no sign of motion.
	"FBI!" he called.  "Step out of the vehicle with your hands raised!"
	There was no response and he circled around to the driver's side, 
gun almost pressed against the glass as his left hand snaked over to the 
door handle and tugged on it.  It was locked.
	"Open the door," he ordered but still received no response.
	Scully came around on the other side and tried the passenger 
door, shaking her head as it refused to open.  he waved her back and was 
deciding whether or not he should shoot out the glass when she took the 
decision away from him by picking up a good sized rock and smashing in 
the window on her side with it, reaching in to open the door...

**********

	"Was that what I think it was?" Frohike asked in a low tone, 
raising his head to peak out over the dashboard and out into the night.  
the light had faded, leaving the two of them to gather their wits and 
decide their next move.  
	"If you think it was an alien craft," Byers started, also raising 
his head, "then I would have to concur..."
	They exchanged wary grins as they straightened up  in their seats.
	The car they had been pursuing was stopped dead bout a mile down 
the road.  Somehow, when the light had flashed down, the van had closed 
the distance between the vehicles by two miles.
	"They're not moving," Byers commented after they had stared at 
the car for a few minutes.
	"Nope.  Think they're faking?"
	"I'm not sure..."
	"Think we should take a closer look?"
	Byers nodded slowly.  "We'll drive though..."
	It would be easier to make a fast get away if it came down to that.
	Frohike eased the van into first and was pleasantly surprised 
when it responded without a hitch, half afraid that the light and sudden 
stop had damaged the engine in some way.
	The car remained utterly still as they approached and when he 
pulled up parallel to it no one took a shot at them or waved a white flag 
of surrender.
	"I'm getting out," Byers said, doing just that, Frohike right behind.
	The doors on the car where all locked, the engine running, 
headlights blazing.
	Frohike found a rock and swung it into the driver's side window, 
taking childish pleasure in watching the glass disintegrate into little 
gummy shards.
	"I don't believe it," Byers whispered, peering inside.

**********

	Shelton and Langly stood on either side of the idling car from 
Raven crest.  Langly had refused to listen to Shelton's repeated warnings 
to stay back and, deep down, the agent wasn't really surprised in the 
least; he would never admit it, but he rather liked the quirky Lone 
Gunman and could see a little (very little) bit of himself in the other man.
	"Open up!" Shelton ordered to whomever was in the car, but they 
weren't buying it.
	"Shelton, I don't think anyone's in there," Langly called across 
the top of the car.  "If they were I don't think that they'd cower inside."
	"You've got a point, Langly."  Shelton was tired of waiting 
around and since no one inside the car had said anything by way of 
objection and since he really didn't think there was anyone in the line 
of fir, he fired a round into the glass of the driver's side window, 
watching with satisfaction as it exploded inwards allowing him a clear 
view of the interior, on which he kept the gun trained.
	There was no one inside.
	
**********

	"There's no one here."
	"Where'd they go?"
	Byers leaned against the side of the car in frustration.  "I 
think that light had something to do with it."
	"No kidding, Byers, I'm not an idiot.  It was a rhetorical 
question."  Frohike ran a hand through what little air he had left, 
mumbling to himself.  "But why them?  Why not us as well?"
	Byers looked over at his friend.  "Maybe the E.B.E.s were offened 
by your sense of fashion."
	"Heh.  Very funny.  Was Mulder here, do you think?"
	"I don't know."   He peered into the car again, noting the 
seatbelt that was still securely fastened but holding nothing but empty 
air.  "From the look of things there was only one person and I think it's 
safe to say that Mulder wasn't the driver..."
	"But we can't tell for sure..."
	"No.  We can't."

**********

	Dana heard Skinner mumble somthing in surprise when she shattered 
the window with a rock she had found lying off to one side of the road.  
Well, he may not like it, but she wasn't going to wait around all night 
while her boss stared at the car.
	As the glass broke, she could see that there was no one in the 
passenger seat, and as she bent to snake a hand in to unlock the door, 
she saw that the driver's seat was empty as well.  Heart sinking, she 
pulled the door open and stooped to get a better look, unable to see 
anyone at all in the vehicle, a bitter feeling of disappointment mingling 
with fear.
	<Oh God, Mulder, what if I was wrong?> she thought, eyes burning 
as she started to stand up to tell Skinner what she saw.
	The groan startled her.
	Her head jerked up so fast that it almost hit the roof of the car 
as she peered into the back seat, and more specifically, at the floor of 
the back of the car.
	"Mulder!"
	"Scully, what is it?"  Skinner had joined her and nearly got 
knocked over as she turned to answer him.
	"It's him, sir!" she exclaimed, climbing back in to get a much 
better look in the light from the overhead fixtures in the car.  She 
couldn't make out much more than a huddled figure on the floor at the 
bakc, so she searched for the lock release, getting back out of the car, 
as Skinner pulled open the rear door.
	"Oh my God," the assistant director whispered.
	Dana wanted to push him out of the way, impatience brimming in her.
	After what seemed like an hour, but was only a couple of seconds, 
he holsted his gun and reached in to pull Mulder out.
	She had to bite back a gasp of shock as she got her first look 
at her friend.
	It was immediately obvious that he hadn't had an opportunity to 
shave since he was abducted and a ragged beard hid part of his face, but 
not the gauntness of his features.  He had lost weight as well, an 
alarming amount from the look of him, and his skin, even in the dim light 
the car and the moon were giving off, was too pale to be healthy.
	She knelt down beside him, hands trembling as she felt for a 
pulse, while Skinner wrestled him out of the straightjacket.
	Her thoughts were an incoherent jumble as she alternated between 
joy and euphoria at finding Mulder alive and white hot rage at those who 
had done this to him.  She barely heard Skinner suggest that they get him 
back to their car and to the nearest hospital.
	<It's over, Mulder,> she thought, allowing Skinner to pull her to 
her feet, helping him get the younger man supported between them.  <It's 
over.>
	She was wrong.

**********

	In Mulder's apartment in Washington, the phone rang.
	He picked up on the second ring.
	"Get out now," was all that was said before the person on the 
other end hung up.
	He was out of the apartment in less than five minutes.

**********

	Mulder opened his eyes slowly, taking his first look at his 
surroundings carefully.
	No blinding lights assaulted him no feeling of weightlessness, no 
far out alien technology.
	In fact, it looked like he was in an ordinary hospital room.
	<Great,> he thought with something like his usual humour.  <The 
aliens come and *again* I'm not worth the effort...>
	He still felt more than a little bit groggy and so he was at a 
loss when a doctor appeared at the foot of his bed and looked him over 
with the detached manner he hated so much.  Especially when it came from 
Scully...
	He didn't want to think about her right now.  There'd be time 
enough for mourning *after* he figured out what the hell was going on.
	This doctor, behind the cool stare, looked more...personable than 
the last man claiming to be a doctor Mulder had been near.
	"Agent Mulder, how do you feel?"
	It took him a couple of tries to get his voice working properly 
but he finally managed.  "Bit disoriented.  Where -- where am I?"
	"Baltimore General.  Don't worry, the disorientation will pass.  
As I understand it, you've spent most of the last month on some heavy 
sedatives.  Do you think you're up to seeing a couple of visitors?  Your 
three friends -- the Crazed Shooter or some such moniker -- are wearing 
holes in our carpeting."
	<The LG here?>  Mulder was beginning to get a grip on what had 
happened and if he was right, he'd be writing articles for the group 
until he was old and gray repaying them.  "Sure..."
	"What about Miss Scully?  She's also quite concerned about you..."
	<Oh God, Melissa,> Mulder thought.  <I can't...not right now...>  
"Just the three."
	"Yes, sir, but they can't stay long."

**********
	
	"What's taking so long?" Dana growled from her seat.
	"Cool down," Doug advised.  "You're the doctor.  you know this 
could take a while"
	The look she shot him told him that she knew that, but didn't 
want to be remined of the fact at this particular moment, so he offered a 
weak smile and shut the hell up, scanning the waiting room as he did so.
	Langly and Frohike were pacing back and forth while Byers sat ina 
a nearby chair.  Skinner had left soon after he and Dana had arrived with 
Mulder, saying that he was going to the Baltimore Buearu to get back up 
for a search of Raven Crest.  The other four had arrived shortly  there 
after, following a frantic exchange of phone calls upon their return to 
the local service area.
	So far they had been left to their own devices for the better 
part of two hours and the strain of waiting was beginning to takes its toll.
	A doctor came out of the ICU and nodded at each of them in turn.
	"I'm pleased to say Agent Mulder has regained consciousness," he 
began but was overwhelmed by shouts from the LG as Dana let out a pent up 
sigh of relief.  The doctor cleared his throat and continued.  "Ahem.  
H's still a little dazed and we're waiting on toxicology reports but it 
seems that he'll be fine, given a little time.  I told him that you're 
all quite eager to see him and he's asked for the three of you.  None of 
you are exactly members of the immediate family, although Miss Scully is 
listed as next of kin, but under the circumstances, I think it would be 
okay for you all to see him."  He indicated the LG who each turned to 
look at Dana.
	She was at a loss for words, afraid that Mulder was angry with 
her, after all it had taken her the better part of three weeks to even 
deduce that something was truly wrong...
	"Go ahead," she said finally, after seeing that the three were 
not going to go without some word from her.
	They went, but not completely happy with it.  She turned away 
from Doug after they left and collapsed moodily into a chair.
	"Dana?"
	"Wonder when Skinner's going to let us know how it went?"  She 
ignored his overtures, concentrating instead on hoping that the FBI had 
managed to round up the ones responsible.
	She'd worry about what to say to Mulder when she spoke to him.  
However long away that moment might be.

********

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From: larchiba@unixg.ubc.ca (Jess Archibald)
Newsgroups: alt.tv.x-files.creative
Subject: new: COMMITMENT 19/20
Date: 22 Nov 1995 21:25:14 GMT


That's right...second to last part...

Disclaimer's in part 17

Commitment part 19 by Jess Archibald

	"Hey, Mulder.'
	He turned  his head, saw the LG approaching the bed and felt a 
smile stretch across his feautres for the first time in what felt like years.
	"I like the bearded look," Byers commented, slipping in to stand 
to his right while Frohike and Langly took the other side.
	"You would," Mulder retorted.  "Would someone tell me what the 
hell happened?"  He wasn't ready to tell them what he had seen in the 
midst of that white light quite yet.  First he wanted answers, not the 
least of which was how Scully had died.
	"It might take a while, Mulder," Langly chipped in.  "Your doctor 
told  us that if we stay here too long, he'd throw us all out."
	"And he meant it too," added Frohike.
	"What.  Happened."  He enunciated each word clearly, conveying 
the strength of his desire for answers.
	The three exchanged looks.
	"Ah, Mulder, now isn't the best time," Byers temporized.
	"I...I already know about Scully."  Mulder got the words out 
somehow.  "How...how did it happen?"
	"Her getting shot, you mean?" asked Langly.
	"Is that what happened?"
	"Yeah, but..."
	"Bastards."
	"Well, she wasn't too pleased either," Frohike replied.
	Mulder looked at him.  "Excuse me?"
	"I said she wasn't too -- "
	"She *said*?"
	Byers looked from Mulder to Frohike to Langly.  "Are we talking 
about the same thing here?  Mulder, what were you asking about?"
	"How did Scully die?"
	The LG started to grin.
	"So that's why you wanted to see us," Byers said.
	"Uh, Mulder, she's out in the waiting room and she isn't happy 
about being out there while we're in *here*."  Langly leaned forward to 
emphasize his point.
	"She's not dead?"  Mulder began to feel a marked improvement.  
"Oh no...she's going to kill me, isn't she?"
	"After all the trouble we went through to save you life?  She'd 
better not."  Byers motioned for the others to follow him out.  "We'll 
send her in, okay?"
	Mulder nodded.

*********

	Skinner walked back into the waiting room and nodded to Doug 
before coming to a stop in front of Dana.  She found the energy to stand 
to meet him, although a bone deep weariness was beginning to leech 
through her; the last few days had held little time for true rest and the 
infected wound in her side was taking more energy than she had to spare.
	"Sir?" she greeted.
	"Taylor had already cleared out of Raven Crest by the time we got 
there.  Somehow he was warned.  There were no records of any Mr. Cooper 
in the computer and no one on staff that I talked to remembered seeing 
anyone matching Mulder's description.  There was no nurse named Julia on 
the staff either."
	"So they've all gotten away," Dana said bitterly.
	"What about that light we all saw?" asked Doug, joining the 
conversation.  "Whoever was driving those cars vanished when that light did."
	"Including the man who shot me and was driving the car Mulder was 
in," she concluded.  "What about the double?"
	"Mulder's apartment is empty.  I had a few agents go and check, 
but he was gone before they arrived."
	"So he's still out there somewhere..."
	"Hey, Scully!" Langly called coming back into the room, waving at 
Doug and eyeing Skinner with curiousity.  No one made any moves to 
complete a formal introduction.  "There's been a misunderstanding but we 
cleared it up.  Mulder thought you were dead."
	"He *what*?"
	"Dead," Langly repeated patiently.  "We straighted him out and I 
think he wants to see you now."
	Suddenly, Dana wasn't so sure of what to do, but Doug solved her 
problem by nudging her forwad with a whispered, "Go on."
	"We'll be down in teh cafeteria when you're done," Langly said, 
meaning the LG, and with that, he vanished down the hall.
	"I think I have a phone call to make," Skinner said and went the 
other way.
	"I'll be with the Gunmen," Doug said.  "You sure you're okay?"
	She smiled at him with what felt like the first real warmth she'd 
felt in years.  "Never better."
	
**********

	Mulder's response to seeing Scully was immediate.  He managed to 
sit up straighter and grin widely at her.  From the look on her face, she 
was equally pleased to see him.
	"I'm afraid I don't have a football video to give you," she said 
with a smile, sitting on the edge  of his bed.   "Things have been a 
little too hectic for shopping."
	"I'd settle for a Bureau training guide right now," he replied.
	"I think that could be arranged."
	They stopped bantering for a moment.
	She grabbed his hand during the silence.  "Are you all right?"
	He hadn't spoken to her in nearly a month, but he could still 
tell what she was saying without speaking all the words.  "I'm fine, 
Scully.  No crazier than I was before...at least not now that I'm out of 
that place...where ever it was..."
	"I'll tell you all about it in the morning."
	"How about now?"
	She nodded and began to speak.

**********

	Melissa picked up the phone on the second ring.  She knew who it 
was before the receiver even reached her ear.
	"Hello, Director," she said.  "Where is she?"
	
**********

	Skinner was waiting for Margaret and Melissa at the front 
entrance to  the hospital.  He had given Melissa the barest details over 
the phone and had asked her to come down and bring her mother with her.  
Unsure of how Scully planned to deal with the situation, he had felt it 
cruel to let her family keep thinking she was dead when he had had to 
tell half the Bureau that she wasn't.  What he was keeping under wraps 
was the fact that there was an impostor of Mulder running around 
Washington.  They'd have to deal with that later.  He suspected that the 
Scullys would have to be told, but that would be a choice made by Dana 
and Mulder.
	When Melissa and Margaret arrived, he told them where Scully was 
and decided to make himself scarce when they found her.
	He was getting too old for all this.

*********

	Mulder decided he'd be paying back favours for the rest of his 
natural life and at least five hundred years of any after life.
	"I don't know what to say, Scully," he said.  "Are *you* all right?"
	"I think I'm in better shape than you are."
	"That's not saying much."
	"True."
	They both  smiled but then Mulder's expression turned serious .
	"Did you see anything in that light, Scully?"
	She looked puzzled by the question.   "Mulder, I couldn't see 
anything.  Why do you ask?"
	"Nothing."
	"Mulder, did you see something?"
	He looked away and then back again.  "I thought...I thought I saw 
Sam..." 
	"Your sister?"
	He nodded, not saying anything else.
	She sighed.  "Maybe you did, Mulder, a psychological reactions to 
-- "
	"No, Scully," he said.  "Not psychological.   I'm sure of that."
	They were silent for a long moment.
	"I don't know if it'll mean anything to you," she said slowly 
after a long while, " but I know that I've seen taylor somewhere before..."
	"Where?"
	She looked him straight in the eye.  "I have no idea..."
	"Maybe it does mean something, Scully."
	"Maybe..."  She stood.  "Get some sleep, Mulder.  You won't be 
leaving the hospital for a while, so you might as well get used to it."
	"Scully, I don't think I can take much more of any hospitals 
right now."
	"It's okay, Mulder," she replied.  "I'll make sure that there's 
always someone here we can trust."
	"That's can't be a long list."
	"Mulder..."
	He grinned.
	It was good to be back.

**********

	Dana found her mother and sister waiting for her when she finally 
left Mulder, having Doug paged and asking  him to stay with her partner 
for the time being.  He had agreed without protest and had advised her to 
get some rest of her own.  She thought it was a very good idea until she 
saw her family.
	Without a word, she fell into her mother's open arms, raching for 
Melissa with her right hand.  Nothing was said for a long moment.
	"I'm sorry," Dana whispered finally, pulling back.
	"It's all right," her mother said.  "Director Skinner explained 
most of it to us."
	"Are you all right?" Melissa asked, but Dana suspected that her 
sister already knew the answer.  Missy could sometimes be more 'spooky' 
than Mulder.
	"Good as new in a few days...Mulder might take a little longer 
than that..."
	"How is he?" Margaret asked, maternal concern switching gears to 
concentrate on the person she couldn't see at the moment.
	"It might take a while, but he'll be fine...physically at 
least...it might take a bit longer to be sure he's fine mentally, but I 
think he'll be back to normal before too long."   Even as she sple the 
words, her belief in them strengthed.  Physically, Mulder's only real 
problem looked to be malnutrition; she hadn't seen any signs of drug 
withdrawal and the hospital toxicology reports would be back her up on 
that.  Mentally...with Mulder it was sometimes hard to tell but she 
thought that she could see signs of a frightened little boy in him...not 
too surprising considering whom she was dealing with.
	Now if only they could find that damned double.  Then she'd feel 
the whole thing was over.

**********

Pentagon

	Smoke was hanging heavily in the air, making the room hazy.  The 
ashtray was filled to overflowing, but that didn't stop the  man from 
adding a few more ashes to the heap while he waited for his phone to ring 
as he knew it would.
	When it finally did, he waited for three rings before he picked up.
	"What should I do now?" said a voice that sounded much like Fox 
Mulder's.
	"Get out of the country," the man said simply, as if it should be 
obvious. 
	"That wasn't what I signed on for.  You said that you could 
change my appearance..teach me how to do it..."
	"*After* the situation was taken care of.  It wasn't"
	"That  was hardly my fault."
	"No, but we might still need you as you are.  Taylor's methods 
were far too heavy handed.  We'll have to wait before we can try anything 
again.   I'll be in touch."
	"How will you find me?"
	"Don't worry.  I will."  He hung up, sat back and stubbed out his 
cigarette. 
	A few seconds later, he lit up another.

**********

Day 37

	"Absolutely not."  Scully crossed her arms and blocked the way 
out of the room, scowling fiercely at her partner.  "You are *not* leaving."
	"Sorry, Scully," he said with a grin, sounding anything but.  
"Paperwork's already done.  heard you were coming and got them to rush on 
my discharge papers."  He shrugged.  "that's life."
	She adopted her 'Mulder, you're a complete idiot' look but he 
could tell that, as usual, she didn't mean ti in indignation but, he 
hoped, in a kind of perverse affection.
	He, of course, retaliated with his most innocent look which 
almost never failed to wear down her resolve.
	"All right!" she said, flinging up her hands.  "*Somebody* has to 
drive you back to Washington."
	"Why do you think I was waiting for you?"
	"On one condition," she persevered."
	"What?"
	"No work until next week."
	"Okay."
	"Late next week."
	"Okay."
	"Promise."
	"*Okay*"
	"I don't believe you."
	"Where's all the trust gone?"
	They both froze as soon as the words had crossed his lips.
	She forced a smile.   "It's still here, Mulder."
	"Is it?"
	"Mulder..."
	"I mean it, Scully.  How can you be so sure that I'm who I say I 
am?  After what just happened?"
	"What just happened had nothing to do with trusting *you*.  It 
had to do with trusting someone who *looked* like you.  There *is* a 
difference."
	"And how do you know that I am who I say I am?"
	"I know, Mulder."
	"But --  ?"
	"*Mulder*!  Only you can get me so damned exasperated!"
	"I think I'll take that as a compliment."
	
***********

	They made a stop on the way home and Robert Wainwright finally 
got to meet Fox Mulder.  Dana Scully was sure that she'd be hearing about 
the meeting from both sides for a long time to come.
	She couldn't wait.

*********

===========================================================================

From: larchiba@unixg.ubc.ca (Jess Archibald)
Newsgroups: alt.tv.x-files.creative
Subject: new:COMMITMENT 20/20
Date: 23 Nov 1995 07:19:28 GMT


Well, folks, we've reached the end of what, for me anyway, was an epic...

Thanks go to everyone who sent me mail, begged for more and general made 
me feel like this story had a warm reception...you're all 
wonderful...that's including everyone who just reads...without all of you 
this wouldn't be half as much fun...

and so it ends...

Disclaimer:  Characters copyrighted 1993 by CC and 10-13 productions.  
Story and the characters of Douglas Shelton and Robert Wainwright belong 
to me.

COMMITMENT part 20 by Jess Archibald

Day 39
Fox Mulder's Residence
11:46 a.m.

	Dana knocked on the door and waited until Mulder came to open 
it.  The federal agents who searched the apartment while looking for the 
double had had to break the door down to do so.  Dana had nagged Skinner 
until he agreed to have the Bureau pay for replacing the door and 
installing a new lock, but htere hadn't yet been time for her to get a 
copy of the key.
	<And where the hell has our impostor gone,> she thought relucant 
to acknowledge the fact that they may never find him.  If someone could 
make such a convincing physical match of Mulder, it was hardly 
inconceivable that the process could be undone, leaving them with no 
adequate physical description of the suspect.  As it was, word at the 
Bureau was sketchy on what had gone on and since the fake Mulder had 
become a bit of a recluse after her supposed death, many agents were 
embracing the idea that Mulder had snapped and under gone treatment for 
some form of mental illness.  It was closer to the truth than she, 
Mulder, Doug or Skinner would have liked but there wasn't too much they 
could do to correct these assumptions.
	Mulder finally pulled open the door to let her in, giving her 
time to take in his appearacne with a mild frown.  The beard was gone, 
but the unhealthy pllor remained.  She wondered briefly if she could 
scout up  an X-File that would take them to California or somewhere sunny 
and then added good cuisine to the mental list.  His weight wasn't back 
up to anywhere near what it should be.
	"Are you coming in, Scully?" he asked with bemusement, chuckling 
a little as she brushed past him only to stop short in amazement at the 
sight of the living room which was clean for the first time she could 
remember seeing it.
	"Relax, Scully," he said, inching past her to enjoy the stunned 
expression on her face.  "I just wanted to make sure anything that was 
*his* got removed as evidence or taken to the nearest incinerator.  
That's all."
	"It sure as hell better be," she replied, shaking her head to 
clear it.  "You said you wanted to see me.  is something wrong, or did 
you just want company?"  Mulder seemed to need to have people around him 
lately and she was the first person he called  when he needed to talk to 
someone.
	"Right," he said, going over to the desk by the indow, which was 
still as messy as ever, pushing through files looking for something.  
"Aha!"  He tossed a small box over to her which she caught 
automatically.  "That's yours."
	"What is it?" she asked suspiciously.  Mulder giving gifts?  
Something was seriously wrong with this picture.
	"Something I got from Taylor," he said expression darkening.
	Now she was confused, and dropped onto the couch to open the 
box.  A delighted grin lit up her face when she saw the small gold cross 
inside.
	"So that's where it went!  I thought it was on the bottom of the 
Potomac." 
	"Sorry I didn't give it to you sooner, but the chain was broken 
and I wanted to get it fixed first."
	"You didn't have to."
	"I know.  But I'm claiming it as a business expense."
	They both laughed and she took it out of the box and put it back 
on while Mulder produced a file and waved it at her.
	"I wanted to talk to you about this."
	She recognized it as the file on the UFO sightings and 
disappearances in Kentucky which she had shown to the Lone Gunmen what 
seemed like months ago.
	"Mulder, no business," she said.  "That case is nearly a month old."
	"Scully these disappearances...the first one happened the night I 
was taken."
	"What are you saying?  That the government knew you would 
investigate that case and wanted you to stay out of the it?  They sure as 
hell could have picked an easier way to divert you!"
	"I don't know.  Maybe...I guess we'll never know, will we?"
	They stared at each other for a long time.

**********

Day 42
Hoover Building
9:03 a.m.

	Mulder walked into his office and took a deep breath.  It was 
like coming home.
	Scully was hard at work at the computer, but she looked up when 
he entered.
	"Mulder, what are you doing her?" she asked in surprise.  "You're 
not supposed to be back until next week."
	"I got bored," he said, tossing his coat onto a hook by the 
door.  "There's only so many football games a guy can watch before they 
all look the same."
	"You still shouldn't be here," she scolded.  "YOu still need rest 
-- "
	"Scully," he protested, "I've had more than enough 
rest...besides, Shelton tells me that you shouldn't be here 
either...something about healing bullet wounds?"
	She made a face and switched off the computer.  "Fine.  Then we 
should both leave before Skinner sees us."
	"Too late."  Skinner came in behind Mulder, scowling at both 
agents.  "I left word at the front desk that I should be notified if 
either of you stepped foot in the building before next week.  Imagine my 
surprise when I get a call saying that not one, but *both* of you are 
here in violation of my orders."
	The partners exchanged glances and Scully was relieved to see the 
familiar spark of amusement in Mulder's eyes.
	"Out of here, both of you," Skinner said ina no-nonsense tone, 
waiting impatiently until they had gathered their coats and preceded 
him out.  He escorted them as far as the elevator.  "One more thing..."
	<Uh-oh,> MUlder thought, bracing himself.
	"It's good to see you back, Agent Mulder, although I wish your 
taste in neck ties was as subdued as you double's."  He indicated 
Mulder's alarmingly bright yellow paisley print with an expression of 
distaste.
	The partners managed to get into the elevator and get the doors 
shut before they started to laugh.

**********

Offices of the Lone Gunmen
10:37 a.m.

	They'd stopped for coffee before deciding to pay a visit to the 
LG.  Mulder was surprised that Scully ahd agreed so readily.
	An argument was raging when the stepped through the door and they 
both waited patiently, listening to the theories flying back and forth.
	The object of contention was one of the miracle defrosters that 
had been advertised on television for the past several months, the type 
that involved no heating elements, just a metal sheet that would somehow 
thaw frozen foods by drawing on the ambient heat in the air.  From the 
sound of the *discussion*, the LG had run a metal analysis on the tray 
and had discovered that it was somposed of an iron alloy that contained 
something else that defied indentification.  The debate was whether or 
not the material was alien in origin or merely the government's way of 
testing a new compound without the public knowing about it.  Frohike and 
Langly were for the former, leaving Byers to defend his position all by 
himself.
	"Several manufactures have all come out with a similar product at 
the same time," Byers was saying.  "It's highly improbable that they all 
could have gotten access to alien technology within the same time 
period.  It's much more likely that the government fed them all the data 
on a new material they wanted tested out."
	"With all the information that we have on the government we would 
have already seen evidence of that," argued Langly while Frohike bobbed 
his head in agreement.
	"Unless of couse it was an alien compound and the government is 
the one distributing it," said Mulder from the doorway.
	That stopped the debate cold for a moment as the three looked at 
him and grinned widely.
	"Is that what you think, Mulder?" asked Frohike.  In lieu of a 
greeting, they were drawing him into the debate.
	"Why not."
	Scully exhaled noisily.
	"What do you think, Scully?" asked Langly in a mocking tone 
softened slightly be a wry smile.
	She joined Mulder in the center of the room, leaning on the edge 
of Byers' desk.  "Why can't you just give credit to the manufacturers and 
admit that they have outstanding research departments?"
	"yeah, right," siad everyone else in unison.
	"More than one company at the *same* time launching a similar 
invention?" said Mulder in askance.
	"Industrial espionage," she countered.

	That shut him up for a moment, but by that time, the LG had 
rallied and launched a joint assault on her theory which left her too 
busy defending herself to see the grin that crept onto her partner's face 
as he plunged back into the debate on the side of the LG.
	The discussion ended about an hour later with the LG claiming 
victory, leaving Scully shaking her head in disgust and Mulder laughing 
silently at the interplay between the others.  Langly mentioned that 
Shelton had made plans to drop by later in the week to discuss the latest 
in wiretap technology.  Frohike was back to his obnoxious self, flirting 
with Scully at every interval until she was bout ready to kill him or at 
least arrest him for sexual harassment of a federal officer.  Mulder 
decided that leaving was a good idea.
	It was time to move on.

**********
THE END!!!
Whew...now I can go study...
Okay, I'm not going to leave things like this...there's still the matter 
of the Kentucky situation and that pesky double's still on the loose 
(snicker..oh, we're going to have *fun* with that)

here's what I've got in the works:

MISSING:  This takes place during and after Scully's abduction and 
introduces another new character of mine, Zoe Bateman, a federal agent 
who meets Mulder just after the events in "3".

COLLUSION: the sequel to Commitment in which Mulder, Scully, Shelton and 
Bateman had to Kentucky.  This will have some more clues as to just what 
the double really is...

SINS OF THE MIND:  A killer leaves no physical trace at any of the crimes 
scenes and forms an unusual bond with one of the agents investiagting the 
crime...any guess as to which one?

I'm thinking of writing a brief "Going Down" story based on events in 
Commitment...you're partner and best friend returns seemingly from the 
dead after you receive a warning someone close to you will kill you...if 
you were Scully and if *you* know there's a double of your friend out 
there what would you do?  Anyone interested?

Okay, enough teasing.  I have to actually write them first...keep 
pestering me...I'll get 'em done...just let me finish my term papers 
first, okay?...please?...I'll be good....

Thanks again for all the support

	Jess
	larchiba@unixg.ubc.ca

